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Project Name: Hide - Martin Axelsson ft Stephanie Kay
Status: Feedback
Artist:  Martin Axelsson Tempo:  130 bpm
License:  Public Domain Public Domain Signature:  4/4
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 Comment Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2015 
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Hello everyone!
Now I have been working on this song a few weeks and I can not get the better of the moment.
Hope I learned a lot and the next project / song takes me a few steps more.

I really love to receive suggestions for improvement



All the best

Martin

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 Comment Posted: Sun Jan 25, 2015 
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Nice song.

I really like the tune however I just don't know where you want this song to sit as it has "pop" drums and "dance" overtones.

Up to the point the when the snare comes it has a nice dance feel about it (that's my taste of sound), once the snare starts it starts to sound more pop like. So you could try and punch the bass drum through more and or change the snare i.e drop it and add something else not sure what have a good play about, handclaps, rim hit, cowbells just play about a bit.
The Toms Toms also take it down the pop route so again change them to some more like electric Toms Toms or something else to do the fill-in.

Hope I don't sound too negative.

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Carly

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 Comment Posted: Mon Jan 26, 2015 
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A new genre. Danpop :lol:

Not one of my favorites but it is still very well done. Vocals are a bit off key early in. Love the break! The beat needs some love. I agree with poohbear on the snare & toms.

I will say it again. You have a gift! Keep spitting tracks out.

Peace





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 Comment Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2015 
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Poohbear

I really appreciate your tips.
Dance or Pop :) I agree with you

You gave me good tips

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 Comment Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2015 
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Sympleman wrote:
A new genre. Danpop :lol:

Not one of my favorites but it is still very well done. Vocals are a bit off key early in. Love the break! The beat needs some love. I agree with poohbear on the snare & toms.

I will say it again. You have a gift! Keep spitting tracks out.

Peace


Danpop :) Thats me :)

Thank you again for taking you time to listen and give me some comments.

I don´t know what I do..... But I love It!!!!!! haha

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 Comment Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2015 
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Martin Axelsson wrote:
Danpop :) Thats me :)

Thank you again for taking you time to listen and give me some comments.

I don´t know what I do..... But I love It!!!!!! haha


Man you have some killer tracks! Straight up!

Reason has so much to offer and I always feel like I'm winging it. Just depends on how deep you dig!

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